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I agree with Bee. Overall this is a pretty good site and those shirts are pretty alright! Good job. :3

It's a bit too bright everywhere. TaintedSoldiers got it right when he said that it's kind of screaming for attention everywhere. You need a little bit of variation in your saturation. Another thing is that honestly none of the parts feel like they belongs with each other. There's no...

Good job!

You should try drawing from life as reference, even if you're drawing in a manga style. Looking at people in motion when you're thinking of drawing helps you notice how body parts curve and shape and how their purpose is. Study a little anatomy maybe as well. If you want to get good at drawing...

I'm not sure the twitter thing is necessary for your avatar, especially since it's illegible at that size. Also maybe make the text just a little bit bigger for the avatar. I also second what TwilightPrinze said about the banner.

Don't worry! Most people don't think of indies or smaller games for GOTY awards, but for me it's a simple matter of "which experience did I treasure most" and I think Undertale is the first game I can treasure this way since Mother 3's fan translation came out.

I always find it hard to judge a GOTY every year because every game is good in its own way. I always think that the best games stand out and do things in ways to further our experiences in a way that makes us feel emotions alongside happiness when playing the game. I would also not count out...

Careful! You're using the old twitter logo! Here's a link to their brand assets if you want a new one https://about.twitter.com/company/brand-assets . Also, don't be afraid to use plain white versions of the social media logos. The extra purple added to the banner from the twitch logo feels out...

It's kind of ironic that your Clarity banner lacks clarity haha. The black on dark is hard to read, don't be afraid of heavy contrast by using white text instead. The Clarity text itself is also hard to read. If you want to keep that dark, try to make the background behind it lighter in some way.

Personally I thought you desaturated this a bit much. There's not enough contrast in the image to make it pop in black and white, so using the colors of the image helps draw attention. If this were specifically for Survival Games it may suit being less saturated to seem more dire/serious, but I...

There's not much of interest in this banner. Add a little more contrast in places and don't be afraid to play with different color combos. Blue text on blue background may sound safe, but honestly it's just hard to read here. Add more stuff, I think.

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These are all very nice! Some suggestions: Add a little grunge to the text in the background of the Metal Gear Solid image. The words look a little too clean for the composition. And for the "split woman" try making the image cuts less uniform in height? This is a personal preference, I...

This looks pretty good actually! The text and background are simple enough that a rainbow gradient outline isn't jarring at all and instead sits fairly well! This doesn't mean this couldn't use some work though. Here are my suggestions: 1. Center the type in the image. Right now it's weirdly...

I feel that the song doesn't suit that, then. Though if he wants to go subtle on the movement, there are other things he can make pop with the beat (color/saturation, camera placement, other faster effects?). Looking forward to seeing it!

Oh, I like this, it's cute and simple. I don't agree that it needs anything in the background, honestly, but I've always been a fan of very simple colors and minimal effects (ie my icon). However if you do want to add a subtle pattern in the background, there is subtlepatterns.com for that. As...

I like the two 3d objects at the start and the 2D-looking animation after it but they don't seem to belong together, to be honest. Also the distortion effect during the last part is too consistent. It should probably swing in intensity with the bass of the music. Also maybe add the VHS scanline...

It's missing a bit of snap at the drop. The animation should start slowly (like it is right now), but right when the beat drops it snaps into place much quicker. Also the secondary tilt is a bit superfluous? It's too slow to fit with the beat, anyway. If you do want to add something during that...

Haha, I didn't mean to offend with that comment, but I see how it can be read that way (oops!). By professionals, I meant specifically professional typographers/logo designers. The type you tried to imitate is definitely custom made to the logo (both T's and I's are different), so using a...

I'd suggest adding a very subtle drop shadow (maybe set to linear burn) under the text, as the text on the right panel becomes hard to read because it's light text on a light part of an image. Other than the contrast management, this is pretty good. Nice and simple, classy with script and...