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  1. PunkJax

    Need feedback on my latest reel.

    Great job! There's a few things I'm nitpicky about here and there but they're higher level thought processes I'm too lazy to write about right now haha. First things first: I'm not too fond of your font choice for the reel intro. Yeah, it's easy to read, but it just looks like it's there and...
  2. PunkJax

    New Animated Intro

    There's a frame before the cut that has the stage rotate in the wrong direction and it's bothering me. Otherwise it's pretty good, good job!
  3. PunkJax

    Giving Branding Critique

    Hey! Try adding a little raspberry in the corner of your thumbnails so all of them seem consistent in brand! The "Slice" in your banner is a little hard to read in front of the raspberry so maybe try masking/erasing the raspberry from the inside of the letters there. As for your icon, I don't...
  4. PunkJax

    Giving Branding Critique

    Sorry for the late reply, I've been without a home computer for the last week. Your channel branding isn't too off an inconsistent by any means, as there's lots of MLP to tie it together. I do think you should probably remove the tiny unreadable text from your icon, though (and whatever is in...
  5. PunkJax

    Devin Designs

    Dude, your work is real good! You have a pretty good eye for design, keep it up!
  6. PunkJax

    Review

    Branding is about consistency, but every single instance of your name or even initials is in a different font. Stick to one you like and use it for everything. Your banner R and S should match the one in your icon and the one in your intro if possible. Otherwise, it's good.
  7. PunkJax

    Thumbnail Feed Back PLEASE!!

    It's a little too busy and hard to read in small sizes. Remember that most thumbnails will be seen at a very small size, so be sure to zoom out and check if it's easy to read!
  8. PunkJax

    What Can I Improve On?

    The splat looks a bit pixelated from being sized up in some parts and the white marks around look accidental (there's one on the headband). Also I guess you probably should add content? Text with your username, social media, etc? Give the audience some info more than a minecraft render.
  9. PunkJax

    Giving Branding Critique

    Hey everyone! My name is manny, and I'm a professional graphic designer. And by that I mean I have a degree as a designer and am working as a designer for a company. I pretty much run my own channels (Let's Cats and Review Cats) for fun, but I work when I can and try to do my best (which is why...
  10. PunkJax

    Critique my channels branding.

    Yooooo, your branding is real good. I checked your portfolio, too, and I can hardly believe you're only 16! You have a pretty good eye for design! I will say your banner is a bit lacking in info, but I feel like it's not 100% necessary in your case, as your channel name kind of implies what...
  11. PunkJax

    which thumbnail

    Your more recent one (the one that says #74) is definitely the best. With thumbnails, simple and sweet is the way to go. Your top priority isn't "does this look good". It's "can people see what this is/says from far away or when shrunk down" and THEN "does this look good".
  12. PunkJax

    Critique my first few videos? (Mostly Gaming)

    Your stuff is pretty great! Good job!
  13. PunkJax

    Do YOU think Fallout 4 will make Game of The Year?

    I think it's between Bloodborne, Fallout 4, and MGS5. They're the AAA-titles that have gotten and deserved the most attention due to their excellence in gameplay in general.
  14. PunkJax

    New Intro :D

    That was was real good!!
  15. PunkJax

    Lift Motion RC v2 (intro)

    I partially disagree with everyone here about the non-centered thing. What you do here for the first second of the intro is use the rule of thirds pretty well and committing to the size by cropping off the top and bottom of the logo in the camera is also great, but for marketing purposes it...
  16. PunkJax

    Vividz Graphics

    Logo is real nice. Good use of lighting and layering to visualize depth. The typography here is really bad though. Nothing about black text or white outline fits in this image, and the fact that Vividz is way shorter than Graphics makes the whole banner feel uneven. I suggest moving both words...
  17. PunkJax

    New banner

    Plain 100% black letters on a colored background = no-no. Black letters with black drop shadow or black glow = double no-no! I suggest looking up tutorials on cool things you can do with text in GIMP. Yeah, Paint.net can be useful for stuff like editing photos, but it is super limited for...
  18. PunkJax

    Feedback :D Banner

    Your banner isn't bad. I feel the layout and color use is pretty good, and your choice of font isn't bad either! A few notes though: There's a random apostrophe in-between I and Am above your username for no reason? The fact that "Contact Me" doesn't have a line that extends under it makes the...
  19. PunkJax

    Daily Lower Thirds

    I feel like your animations are pretty good, but your typography definitely needs work. A lot of your type here seems weirdly squished and awkwardly kerned. You should never resize your type unevenly or it looks squished, and as for kerning, try changing Metric to Optical? Kerning is something...
  20. PunkJax

    Royal Graphics - Website!

    Strangely enough, I think focusing your design on one color backfired on you here. In some places, such as the nav, the purples are too close together and make parts blend and harder to notice; meanwhile the brighter purples are kind of out-of-place distracting in the header and footer. I...