This is something I would do make the video shorter, add the epic moments of course, have the right music, becuase the video is like any other vid, anyone can do what you just did (not trying to be offensive just trying to give you another POV of a viewer) besides that love the graphics and the bgm you used, and the thumbnail was nice and bright, my rating for this video would be a 7 and a half out of 10 (in my terms thats really good just a few mistakes)
yea keep it up you have some really good potential, and im not just saying it to say it, im being honest, im gonna sub so i can check up on you from time to time becuase im very busy with my upload schedule myself lolThank you very much for your feedback, will have to defiantly try that in our next video![]()