i started a new channel because my old one was not eye catching and it just wasnt that good of a channel! i hope this is better even tho its just a few videos
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The music is good, might try and sync it with the gameplay a bit. You are a good gameplay wise. I would recommend changing the white text in some of your videos to a color maybe a fade in or some other type animation. I would also not remove the gameplay sound, or at least add gunshots back in.
okay thank you will do.. the reason the sound is removed is because the audio file messed uo when recording
your profile picture should be redone but i love your banner.
think your thumbnails are clean and well made/eye catching
your tags could use alot more work
listening to your recent fortnite video, idk what you did with the game audio but the sniper shots atleast in the beginning sound bad.
if your not doing commentary videos and just want to focus on "heres a thing i did" then i would trim the videos down. i think your videos could improve with some minor editing tricks to make this visually more interesting but overall would recommend making them a bit shorter. you seem to have the branding down its just making the videos better
think your thumbnails are clean and well made/eye catching
your tags could use alot more work
listening to your recent fortnite video, idk what you did with the game audio but the sniper shots atleast in the beginning sound bad.
if your not doing commentary videos and just want to focus on "heres a thing i did" then i would trim the videos down. i think your videos could improve with some minor editing tricks to make this visually more interesting but overall would recommend making them a bit shorter. you seem to have the branding down its just making the videos better
thanks lost trigger... i need to get a better capture card beofre ic an upload my commentary because the ezcap280 doesnt allow me to record voice
Sadly the video is unavailable for us :/ We do hope any constructive comments helped you and we would be more than happy to assist in suggesting further improvements to your channel/videos in the future!