Ok so here is my review - also please note that everything mentioned is just my opinion so feel free to take it with a pinch of salt
Right so the first thing is you channel trailer, yes you do outline what you plan to do on the channel but this seems a bit outdated now. You posted it over a year ago and mention that you upload everyday, and have a plan to reach 100 subs, however as it currently stands your channel is at 158 and looking at your recently uploaded videos you have become a bit lax in your everyday approach. Not necessarily a bad thing but shouldn't take that long to potentially redo the video and update those long terms goals for your channel.
Secondly your about page and social links are looking rather good, the only suggestion that I could say regarding this is to potentially take some time to add a little bit of more information to the about page, maybe tell us something interesting / unique about you, again this is just a suggestion and could be done within minutes
Thirdly, its good to see you are taking the time to organise videos into playlists and showcase this on the front screen of your page, well done on this.
Fourthly, while I don't overly enjoy your choice of music on say some of your minecraft montages (which is probably more me being picky than anything) I think that sometimes your commentary can be a little quiet, especially on your Minecraft Eggwars Stream, potentially try speaker a bit louder or having the mic a little closer to your mouth if it isn't already could be a quick and simple fix for this.
Lastly I just wanted to share some thoughts on your thumbnails, and channel banner. I am a firm believer that your channel banner should outline what to expect from the channel in question and your seems to suggest a mixture of Uncharted, Halo, Rainbow Six Siege, Minecraft and COD, all of which you haven't done on your channel for a while. You might want to get this redone if you have the time spare, if needs be feel free to check the forums, as a lot of talented people can redo banners for free for you. And as for the thumbnails, I feel that you still need to get the consistency down - what I mean by that is some seem rather simple but come across rather well, where as other seems a bit cluttered and rushed. Again this could be my opinion on it, but try and take a minute or two just to make sure they sell the video and really pop to the audience.
Anyway I hope this helps
