this is a pretty good video. I feel it wanders a little, but that'll get better over time. I would start with what days you are uploading and not start with "hey! I'm not uploading on this day", start with what you are doing, not what you are not doing. the editing is pretty solid and I like the gameplay as a base instead of just typing out a word document.
i would also try and work ahead if possible and upload videos ahead of time and schedule them for the week ahead, or more into the future. also, keep a document of what videos you have released so you don't accidently repeat yourself