Before I get into the main review, I just like to say I think your channel is great! You've forced me to be picky haha! Your Twitch and Twitter are nice too and you're active which is great to see. I will outline everything next then at the end I will talk about a couple of the bullet points mentioned to explain myself a bit for a conclusion...
*takes big gulp of air*
Visuals
Good:
- Theme is consistent
- Banner is mostly clear
- colours are nice and it isn’t too bright/dark
- Including yourself in the thumbnail is nice
What could be improved:
- The text on the logo, on the banner should be red=heal black=please heal=heal
- Same for the HPH (white-red-white)
- The logo could be moved up slightly to be more central. The very bottom is slightly cut off.
- Maybe ease off a tad on the lines on the game images (I like the design though) mostly on the image on the left I find it hard to work out what it shown.
- Thumbnails: Some are fine (Perception) but others have a bit too much going on and the text is hard to read (I IGNORED THE NORTH!!)
- Your latest videos are fine for this, but some thumbnails have parts covered up by the time stamp such as (Hand of State 2 | Becoming A Fool and your Lucius videos)
About
Good:
- Your description is very entertaining it made me laugh for sure!
- You talk about yourself and let everybody know your goals which is great.
Just one thing:
- Maybe put a schedule in? How often do you upload? You've put this in your trailer which is cool - just stick it in your about too
Videos & Playlists
Good:
- You have a lot of content that is regularly uploaded, so top marks for consistency (something I need to work on to be honest!).
- You yourself are really lively so I don’t get bored listening/watching you (wow that sounds creepy)
- I watched a couple of your Perception videos and I was almost fully immersed, really interesting game that.
- Your channel trailer is nice just like your about section.
Possible Improvements:
- Background music could be added for your perception videos, or at least for first moments of the video.*
- It wouldn’t do any harm if you show off some clips (funny moments, intense moments etc.) at the end or middle of your channel trailer to really immerse the viewer into your content... actions speak louder than words that sort of thing. Not to replace anything though the rest is great.
- Video tags: most are fine but there are a couple that won't help you at all. “part 4” in “DOLLS ARE SHOOTING ME” brings up 6,360,000 results! And “live” in your trailer (v2) brings up 531,000,000!!!
* I am aware that music might ruin the frightening aspect of perception, I'm not saying put some upbeat music in or anything, but maybe some sounds or a slow song, or better yet a horror piece during it to really boost that immersion. Or you could have music whilst you deliver your intro which then fades out gradually.
So overall fantastic channel, seriously I really like it! Your descriptions are well-filled with a description of the content as well as all your social links etc etc. Your social media as mentioned is cool (your banner on Twitter could change the same way as I mentioned earlier). I LOVED your about section too that was a fun read and there is certainly a humorous theme in your channel especially with your latest videos.
I think that's about everything! So best of luck for the future just keep on doing what your doing and I hope I have helped at least in one way (this is my first time reviewing a channel). And keep healing! (nice thing btw I like the idea of that)
~Jack[DOUBLEPOST=1515618502][/DOUBLEPOST]
I'll get to your next! Proably sometime tomorrow
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