hey guys if you have some free time come check out my newest video any and al feedback will be greatly appreciated
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Hey dude, i just watched the whole video and i thought it was overall really good, you engaged the viewers in a story which made me feel like i had to watch the whole episode, you have a good intro as well. One thing i would suggest is to either turn down the music a tad or turn up your voice, as when you make a video you want your voice to be the centre of attention if not the gameplay, the music should be subtle enough to not override the voice. I hope my feedback helps, if you could review a video on my channel then id be really grateful, my channels just less than a month old and i appreciate all the help i can get!
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClagU9L4mDEtDV1SAcruFKQ
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClagU9L4mDEtDV1SAcruFKQ
hey thanks for watching!!!!! im testing a new program and still trying to get the volume were it needs to be thank you for pointing that out i will work on it in my next video,checking out you newest video now btw i subbed 
,you have a pretty chill intro i like it!!!,1st thing i noticed is that your commentary is very clean and clear thats always a plus when trying to grow,do you have a facecam?i dont really follow a whole lot of pc gameplays but the few that i watch have facecams in them so we can see their reactions which gets really enjoyable not saying that your not i actually found you video really good and dropped a sub other than that evrything else was great keep up the good work
,you have a pretty chill intro i like it!!!,1st thing i noticed is that your commentary is very clean and clear thats always a plus when trying to grow,do you have a facecam?i dont really follow a whole lot of pc gameplays but the few that i watch have facecams in them so we can see their reactions which gets really enjoyable not saying that your not i actually found you video really good and dropped a sub other than that evrything else was great keep up the good work
Thank you so much for taking the time to do that! I'm glad you enjoyed it and you thought i was clear, that's my biggest worry. And I'm saving the face reveal for a massive subscriber milestone later on to show everyone i appreciate there support!
thats awesome buddy,and of course i took the time to help buddy we have to stay in this together and help each other grow there are so many supportive members here stay working hard!!!!
Definitely, with all the bigger channels covering use we have to stick together in order to grow at all.
Great video, just need to balance the voice and music. Other than that great job and congratulations on running the XB1 side of your new team
thank you,i am testing a new program and still learning it i will work on it more in my next video,and thanks were 5-3 in comp play so farGreat video, just need to balance the voice and music. Other than that great job and congratulations on running the XB1 side of your new team