Criticism for my videos? what can i improve?

[SixthsnipeGaming]

just what the title says what can i improve on my videos. i know im not very great at speaking. i don't usually script because i find myself to become more offtrack on what happens if i write down what i Could say i on my latest video i did script the ending because it's short and a little more simplified for myself to cope with but through out the entire video ill just lose my way. i don't mind if it's harsh criticism because things need to be said if they need to be even if my videos are poopy to watch which of course i don't believe they are. lol


However i would like some constructive Criticism about my channel / Videos on it




p.s i am working on a Logo if anyone mentions about it being out of place don't worry i know that will change soon


https://www.youtube.com/user/SixthsnipeGaming

 

[Koala_Steamed]

Everything looks ok to me, seems like you are doing a lot of popular games that other big Youtubers are doing so its going to be tough to get lots of views in. Also looks like you change around games a lot so you may lose some subs if they don't like a particular game or if they subbed just because of one game.

Cam, mic quality, banner and everything is good though so not much I can critique on. Keep it up and I'm sure you will keep growing

 

[SixthsnipeGaming]

Everything looks ok to me, seems like you are doing a lot of popular games that other big Youtubers are doing so its going to be tough to get lots of views in. Also looks like you change around games a lot so you may lose some subs if they don't like a particular game or if they subbed just because of one game.

Cam, mic quality, banner and everything is good though so not much I can critique on. Keep it up and I'm sure you will keep growing

thanks for taking the time to check out my Channel i REALLY appreciate it! and thanks for the criticism im glad to know that what im doing is going well without any problems. i expect to lose some subs because as you said some subs only watch channels based on 1 game but that's to be expected but thanks again for taking the time to comment about the channel! i subbed to your channel for thanks.