Request Can i get some feedback on my newest video?

[IDubHD]

Can you guys please review my newest video?

 

[Marcus Walker]

First off, great thumbnail! I don't understand the intro though? Am i missing something?

My biggest tip is to try to talk through videos, it grabs peoples attention and makes them want to stay and listen. Then check out your channel after if they liked it! Great video quality keep up the work!

 

[Mardy Rooster]

The music did suit your video well, but after a while it got annoying. Your outro seemed long as well. Apart from that I found the video entertaining! You defiantly thought outside the box! Good job and keep it up!