Gaming Call of Duty Edit (feedback)

[BroskiYT]

I want to start to take editing COD seriously, so here is my favorite edit. I am wondering if you can give me feedback and tips.
-Dark Ape

 

[Mythical Violence]

It's great dude. If it was a montage (I know it's just somewhat an example clip), it would be awesome. One of the things I noticed was that you didn't have lens flare (Like light lens flare). Second thing was bloom. But I think there was just a tiny bit of shake. Overall you did good.