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[ShadowMajor]

Hi there guy's I'm hoping you can help me figure out something.

Technically, this should be one of my better videos, but something doesn't quite feel right about it, what do you think?

 

[TwilightPrinze]

The sound and all is good but i think the problem is the Zoom. You first make a small introduction wixh is good and then you make a minor zoom onto the cards. Maybe if you focus the camera on the trick (the camers vieuw point) so the focus is on the trick.

 

[ShadowMajor]

The sound and all is good but i think the problem is the Zoom. You first make a small introduction wixh is good and then you make a minor zoom onto the cards. Maybe if you focus the camera on the trick (the camers vieuw point) so the focus is on the trick.

Ahh good point, thanks very much.