Looking for a reality check

[MihirGaming2013]

Hey fuys, before i start i just want to thank you guys for stopping by. I have uploaded a new video but have got no feedback it. decent likes but i want someone who can give me a reality check. Please do give some feedback thanks

 

[Koala_Steamed]

Nice to see you are doing some different content than most of the other channels The intro was a little bit slow, showing part of what the video is about is a good idea though. Maybe squeeze the clip down to just the goal then cheering around 3 seconds should be enough.

Would have to say that mic quality isn't the best, something small like that can turn off a lot of people watching. Also work on editing a bit, you could try things like slowing down the clip just before the goal as like an instant replay or something. At the moment the channel does look quite like an amateur channel but if you keep working on it I think you can get some views coming in as your not just doing the generic type of youtube stuff. Good luck with it

 

[MihirGaming2013]

Nice to see you are doing some different content than most of the other channels The intro was a little bit slow, showing part of what the video is about is a good idea though. Maybe squeeze the clip down to just the goal then cheering around 3 seconds should be enough.

Would have to say that mic quality isn't the best, something small like that can turn off a lot of people watching. Also work on editing a bit, you could try things like slowing down the clip just before the goal as like an instant replay or something. At the moment the channel does look quite like an amateur channel but if you keep working on it I think you can get some views coming in as your not just doing the generic type of youtube stuff. Good luck with it

Thanks a lot for the reply. I'll try to work on it, anything else I should be looking at while editing?

 

[Koala_Steamed]

I'm not very good at editing myself You could have a look at some other channels and try to find things that you like.