Request What do you think of my storytelling ?

Astinax

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Hey guys !
Thanks for checking out this thread :)
I've recently been trying to improve my skills at "storytelling", I'm always kinda scared of going off topic, including too much details, etc. So I thought I'd ask you guys to let me know what you think :)

Thanks for helping ! :)