Music Song that I created (has a motivational speech in it)

[Steinar DaPro]

Hi, I just created another song it is personally my fav song that I've created by far. This is the fourth song that I've created. I am just getting into this whole music creating. I play piano and I've been learning it for about 4 years now. I'd love to get your feedback on this

 

[Thunderbolt]

I recommend you to learn sidechaining, the trumpets also sound out of sync. Besides that, decent tune!