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[^scelder^]

Hey, so I want to start making youtube videos and I need your tips
How's my audio?
How's my video?
What can I do to improve my video?

 

[LW]

Pretty good sound quality, good video quality even though it's been raining. What about saying a closing sentence? That outro kinda scared me when it came outta nowhere and the loud music started playing...

 

[^scelder^]

Pretty good sound quality, good video quality even though it's been raining. What about saying a closing sentence? That outro kinda scared me when it came outta nowhere and the loud music started playing...

Yep sorry for the loud intro and outro

Check out my new video with couple adjustments: