Request Quick Channel Review

[Gummy 951]

hello I'm looking for a few of you good people to give my channel a look over and tell me what I could I'm prove on. Also if you would please review my newest minecraft video I would greatly appreciate it. Hay who knows if you like it then maybe you subscribe! Lol thanks in advance

 

[fattmat]

hello I'm looking for a few of you good people to give my channel a look over and tell me what I could I'm prove on. Also if you would please review my newest minecraft video I would greatly appreciate it. Hay who knows if you like it then maybe you subscribe! Lol thanks in advance

Increasing the font size might draw more attention for the thumbnail. Your intro is a little jarring at first glance, since it moves around constantly, but that depends on your audience. Your friend's microphone could use some improvement, have you guys considered buying him a new one?

 

[Gummy 951]

Thank you for the input! I have talked about it with a friend of mine and we think it's going to happen. As for the font are you saying the font on the thumbnail like where it says season 2?