Opinions on my first couple videos and my (unscripted) commentary skill

Hevi

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Hey there! I'm sure you've all got things to be doing so I'll keep this short. I need feedback and criticism on my first few videos to be able to improve and make higher quality content. While I'm not exactly new to YouTube (at all) I have for sure been "out of it" for at least a year and would like as much feedback as possible to get "back into it" and ensure that I am producing as high quality as I can. Thanks to all who reply! :)

[Fair warning, my "channel trailer" video contains a swear or two]