Request My first gaming vlog

[Kim_TheVIReviewer]

So me and some friend that i met through playing games on the pc went to insomnia not last weekend but the weekend before, I didn't catch it all on camera but I got a fair bit, I made a vlog about it, and other than the shakey cam i am pretty proud of it, there is probably quite a bit of room for improvement, so I am here, asking you all what you think.

Thanks in advance

 

[fattmat]

So me and some friend that i met through playing games on the pc went to insomnia not last weekend but the weekend before, I didn't catch it all on camera but I got a fair bit, I made a vlog about it, and other than the shakey cam i am pretty proud of it, there is probably quite a bit of room for improvement, so I am here, asking you all what you think.

Thanks in advance

For the first two seconds, you could have used a fade effect to start your video off, or cut out the dead sound. A lot of people click record, wait a second, and talk afterwards, you can save future spots like this when you edit it post production ^^ As for the music, try to make it flow like water, making the transitions smoothly can go a long way ^^