May I have a feedback on my video? thanks

[Kaczmo]

Hello boys & girls, hope y'all having a fantastic day/night, so last night (in the morning I just uploaded the video) and would love to get a feedback and a suggestions for the video!, in the video I am playing a horror based game called Black Rose, I also want to get much much better at entertaining/commentating on my videos.
NOTE: I know that you can't really see the text (on the right side) it's because of handbrake, which I will be fixing

Sincerely
Kaczmo

 

[Showcase One]

You should make the video shorter, make 2 parts each 3 and a half minutes.

 

[Kaczmo]

You should make the video shorter, make 2 parts each 3 and a half minutes.

Oh okay, I will do that for other videos than!

 

[Showcase One]

It's only a suggestion. And maybe get an intro and end card.
Overall good job on the video.

 

[Kaczmo]

It's only a suggestion. And maybe get an intro and end card.
Overall good job on the video.

Cheers man!, Yeah I wanna get a intro/outro, i am waiting for some one to make me one

 

[TerabyteGaming]

The length is just right, 10 - 15 minutes is a good length
also i would reccomend putting an outro in
then again it is just an opinion so you don't have to listen to me

 

[Kaczmo]

The length is just right, 10 - 15 minutes is a good length
also i would reccomend putting an outro in
then again it is just an opinion so you don't have to listen to me

thanks man!, Yeah I am going to put in a outro when I get a bit more videos up so I can link them in the outro
but thanks for the feedback

 

[TerabyteGaming]

thanks man!, Yeah I am going to put in a outro when I get a bit more videos up so I can link them in the outro
but thanks for the feedback

No problem mate

 

[Kaczmo]

No problem mate