Request I Need Crazy Advice [30 seconds]

HypahYT

Respected User
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Apr 28, 2016
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Can you watch the first 1 minute to 30 seconds and judge me please. Thank You!
help a freedom member out
 

Wynthose

Rising User
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Sep 12, 2016
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Nothing to complain about in the video, great work.
maybe a bit more effort on the thumbnails