Gaming Give some feedback?

[SynchronizedRapture]

I have the playlist of my .hack//INFECTION LP as of what's uploaded now. If I could get some feedback on how to improve the commentary or anything at all to make this videos better.
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLkghPSWmRBWbBDHQxd8K80jNgZtmM4cEG