Request feedback on new video

Dana Vaneck

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hey guys if you can please check out my new video and tell me if i need to work on some things,if you can please tell me if my music is to high or if my voice to low? also is the gameplay entertaining? and should i work on another outro? any on all feedback is welcome thanks guys
 

zeke morgan

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Just checked it out and here is my feedback (don't worry its positive :) )

First of all your voice is very crisp and clear, there is no need to worry about that, I didn't have trouble hearing you at any stage in the video. Secondly the music at the start was a little bit loud, I don't know if that was more I wasn't expecting it or my speakers were on a bit loud so I'm not saying they are a negative at all, and the gameplay that you had was entertaining
Lastly I don't think that you need a new outro, its all good :)
 

scorpionvongaming

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hey guys if you can please check out my new video and tell me if i need to work on some things,if you can please tell me if my music is to high or if my voice to low? also is the gameplay entertaining? and should i work on another outro? any on all feedback is welcome thanks guys

I think you have the balance right voice clear and music playing in the background is at the right level.
Intro simple but classy good.