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[Dana Vaneck]

hey guys i been working really hard to make sure my commentary is up to par im not really confident when it comes to it but i do try if you have a sec can you watch my new video and tell me what you like and dislike about it thank you guys!!! www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaHLdQ1NMio

 

[Peter Johnson]

hey guys i been working really hard to make sure my commentary is up to par im not really confident when it comes to it but i do try if you have a sec can you watch my new video and tell me what you like and dislike about it thank you guys!!! www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaHLdQ1NMio

Hey Dana Vaneck!
Although my channel and commentary is pretty poor, I'll try my best to help.
So let me break it down for you.

The positives: Good commentary style
The negatives: Commentary should be louder and the thumbnail text should be bigger

Hope this helped!

 

[Lauren Smith]

nice video! I really enjoyed it commentary could be a little louder but apart from that i commented, liked and subbed

 

[Dana Vaneck]

Hey Dana Vaneck!
Although my channel and commentary is pretty poor, I'll try my best to help.
So let me break it down for you.

The positives: Good commentary style
The negatives: Commentary should be louder and the thumbnail text should be bigger

Hope this helped!

thank you im a quite person but ill work on it lol thanks again

 

[Dana Vaneck]

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nice video! I really enjoyed it commentary could be a little louder but apart from that i commented, liked and subbed

thank you it means alot im not a loud person in general but i will work on it thanks again im glad you enjoyed