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[Dana Vaneck]

hey guys i been working really hard to get my commentary were i need it to be,if you have a sec can you watch my new video and give me some feedback on quality,gameplay,and my commentary it would be greatly appreciated i love hearing from my freedom family thanks guys

 

[Koala_Steamed]

Commentary sounds great, there wasn't any awkward gaps or anything and it was well spoken. I'm not really a fan of commentary that is recorded after game as it sort of detaches you from the video, feels more like a tape recording with a video playing as background, that's just me tho. I've never played that game so can't really give much feedback there sorry xD

Only other thing I'd suggest would be make the intro shorter or use a different style. If this wasn't a channel review, I would have clicked out of the video even before the intro ended. Although again that's just me, but I know a lot of people hate that style of intro.

 

[Dana Vaneck]

Commentary sounds great, there wasn't any awkward gaps or anything and it was well spoken. I'm not really a fan of commentary that is recorded after game as it sort of detaches you from the video, feels more like a tape recording with a video playing as background, that's just me tho. I've never played that game so can't really give much feedback there sorry xD

Only other thing I'd suggest would be make the intro shorter or use a different style. If this wasn't a channel review, I would have clicked out of the video even before the intro ended. Although again that's just me, but I know a lot of people hate that style of intro.

thank you i actually changed my intro if you wanna check it out here is the link thanks for the feedback

 

[Koala_Steamed]

Looks much better More professional was well