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You seem to know what you are doing. At the end, you seemed a bit rushed trying to fill time up, asking for subs/likes and all that might be a bit out of place as well. Your voice level could be slightly louder too.
I was thinking the same thing I really didn't know how to fill the time :/ and as for voice I thought it was loud enough until I watched the rendered version. I put in for the badge but haven't received anything yet. Thank you
I was thinking the same thing I really didn't know how to fill the time :/ and as for voice I thought it was loud enough until I watched the rendered version. I put in for the badge but haven't received anything yet. Thank you
It should take a few days, but you should be doing okay on getting the badge. Filling out time perfectly is hard. I'd consider finding a song that goes really well with your content, the rest flows naturally.