channel ad. What do you think?

[Kristupas Vitkus]

Heeey guys, I am not sure if this is the right category of forum, but I think it's related. Have a look, its short, just an ad for my channel, what do you think?

 

[TwilightPrinze]

Something makes it feel a bit off. The switch with the bullet. It doesn't blend in well

 

[Kristupas Vitkus]

maybe the colors are way too different?

 

[Voldero]

I do not really like the song , try adding 20% of the gameplay sound and overall music at 100%

 

[Aditya Bajaj]

If it is an ad, it probably needs to show what your channel actually does. This one just shows a game, but does not indicates that whether you review that particular game, or are you a general gaming channel or you just post some game plays. Maybe adding some hint as to what the channel does might improve it.

 

[Kristupas Vitkus]

Thank you, now that I think of it, you're actually right