Request Can I Get Some Feedbacks On This

[TheGaminCentral]

Hey guys!
I have been making videos for around a month and I wanted to know how the video is not just quality wise but overall
I know the video is long but it would be great if u guys could review this and let me know what things I should change to make it better

 

[Donavon Hype]

its great man[DOUBLEPOST=1492737489][/DOUBLEPOST]You deserve way more subscribers than me Your content is a 10/10 you thumbnails are on point and your channel art is amazing keep doing what your doing

 

[TheGaminCentral]

its great man[DOUBLEPOST=1492737489][/DOUBLEPOST]You deserve way more subscribers than me Your content is a 10/10 you thumbnails are on point and your channel art is amazing keep doing what your doing

Thanks man really appreciate it!