Request am i improving?

[Dana Vaneck]

hey guys so recently i hit my 100 subs goal and made a Q&A video i was just wondering if you can check it out and tell me what you think like my audio,ive been trying to improve it and i will continue to work,do you like the music i added or no? i would love to hear from you guys thank you

 

[The Prime Gamer]

-Great thumbnail
-Really good audio (Your great at commentating)
-Good HIGH quality game-play
-Super enjoyable!
-Awesome story about your AFRO haha!

Good stuff man, keep going at it!

 

[Dana Vaneck]

-Great thumbnail
-Really good audio (Your great at commentating)
-Good HIGH quality game-play
-Super enjoyable!
-Awesome story about your AFRO haha!

Good stuff man, keep going at it!

thank you!!!!! i always worry about my commentary i feel likes it never good but i always hear different,im glad you enjoyed it i have a blast dloing youtube and yea i wish you coulda seen it man it was huge

 

[Fourth Wall Games]

The only real comment I can give is that you are in serious need of a pop filter, the amount of popping when you talk, is unbearable to listen to.

If you are on a headset mic, then you need to move the mic a lot further away from your voice, or preferably buy a stand alone mic with a pop fiter.

Other than that, looks good