3D Smoke-Shockwave Intro

[Andrew's Graphic Designs]

Feedback Thanks.

 

[TwilightPrinze]

First of your intro takes too long before the content comes.
Second, your Mic really needs some adjustment.
And third and i'm sorry to say but if i must rate that intro it is a 2 out of 10...

 

[ReesFitz92]

Don't know why but the text just seems really out of place compared to the background lol

 

[Andrew's Graphic Designs]

Thanks for the feedback. Guess I didn't improve much in After Effects.[DOUBLEPOST=1450709584][/DOUBLEPOST]

First of your intro takes too long before the content comes.
Second, your Mic really needs some adjustment.
And third and i'm sorry to say but if i must rate that intro it is a 2 out of 10...

I am getting a webcam with a mic built in to it for Christmas. The voice I used here was from my phone. It wasn't even from a mic.

 

[TwilightPrinze]

Thanks for the feedback. Guess I didn't improve much in After Effects.[DOUBLEPOST=1450709584][/DOUBLEPOST]

I am getting a webcam with a mic built in to it for Christmas. The voice I used here was from my phone. It wasn't even from a mic.

Ah that explains it. Well keep practising mate

 

[Andrew's Graphic Designs]

I am still a learner with shockwaves.