I made a Intro XD

LifelessDane

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Hey I would just have some feedback on a Intro i start work on.

I am still new using After effects so it is not so much special about it :)
But i would like to show you guys what i learned on just two days :)

Here is the video, displaying the intro :)
All feedback is highly valued.

NOTE: I know about the missing sound. But I only do it to pratice the use of animations :)
 

HippoZoned

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its very generic, its plain, nothing really stands out and why all the green in there? instead of having the text fly in from the side, since you have particles flying at the camera, perhaps you can do a similar effect with the text, tips, use scale and 3D zoom effects, motion blur wouldnt be a bad addition either.
 

LifelessDane

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its very generic, its plain, nothing really stands out and why all the green in there? instead of having the text fly in from the side, since you have particles flying at the camera, perhaps you can do a similar effect with the text, tips, use scale and 3D zoom effects, motion blur wouldnt be a bad addition either.
Thanks for the feedback :)
This was one of my first intros i ever made.
So i did not expect it to be perfect lol

I am still trying to learn all the animations and features in After Effects
And still a long way to go :)
I will try work a bit with what you suggested and may show a new version later on :)
 

HippoZoned

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Thanks for the feedback :)
This was one of my first intros i ever made.
So i did not expect it to be perfect lol

I am still trying to learn all the animations and features in After Effects
And still a long way to go :)
I will try work a bit with what you suggested and may show a new version later on :)

not a problem check out these AE tutorials

http://www.videocopilot.net/tutorials/
 

Ross L Designs

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I also think you should add motion blur to the text to make it look more smooth when the text transitions in. Below is a useful tutorial that's not to complicated to follow, at about 1:06 he shows how to add motion blur. :)